Comments on: A String of Lights http://susanscottmorales.com/2009/01/06/a-string-of-lights/ Be Who You Love Sun, 05 Sep 2010 08:14:41 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.5 By: Chris Lord http://susanscottmorales.com/2009/01/06/a-string-of-lights/#comment-18 Chris Lord Fri, 16 Jan 2009 16:50:52 +0000 http://susanscottmorales.com/?p=34#comment-18 The Petal Sweeper Susan, This is a beautiful poem. From title to last line, it envelops me, becomes the sari wrapping the life of a woman. I love the repetition of swish, and the thought that what we sweep may be petals. The Petal Sweeper

Susan,
This is a beautiful poem. From title to last line, it envelops me, becomes the sari wrapping the life of a woman. I love the repetition of swish, and the thought that what we sweep may be petals.

]]> By: Chris Lord http://susanscottmorales.com/2009/01/06/a-string-of-lights/#comment-17 Chris Lord Fri, 16 Jan 2009 16:50:07 +0000 http://susanscottmorales.com/?p=34#comment-17 "Evaporation" I love the movement in this poem, find at first I want you to keep going, keep on your quest, but when your sweet tooth brings you back into the arms of your sweetheart, I'm happy you arrived in such a good place. “Evaporation”
I love the movement in this poem, find at first I want you to keep going, keep on your quest, but when your sweet tooth brings you back into the arms of your sweetheart, I’m happy you arrived in such a good place.

]]> By: Linda Chapman http://susanscottmorales.com/2009/01/06/a-string-of-lights/#comment-16 Linda Chapman Fri, 16 Jan 2009 16:49:14 +0000 http://susanscottmorales.com/?p=34#comment-16 Since 'String of Lights' this poem has haunted me, transported me to where you've been; where I long to be. Thank you for placing it hear for me to reread. And thank you especially for your voice which I hear as I read. Swish. Since ‘String of Lights’ this poem has haunted me, transported me to where you’ve been; where I long to be.

Thank you for placing it hear for me to reread. And thank you especially for your voice which I hear as I read.

Swish.

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